Sebastians Edit Thread

[Sebastian Devaroux]

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BASE FORM

APPEARANCE Sparrowmon is a cybernetic bird, it is roughly 3 foot in height when standing, Golden with a white face, white hands and feet. This beautiful digimon was created when Penguinmon lost her life, in doing so machine like data seemed to mix with hers changing her rookie and base form into the golen digimon one sees before you. The guns it holds in its hands are a set of twin pistols named "Zanahoria", made by the same craftsman who produced their sister-gun, the "Berenjena" possessed by Beelzebumon. PERSONALITY Sparrowmon is a kind and caring digimon whom will stand up for her tamer withoud fail. Even willing to put herself in harms way, a trait which she knows Sebastian detests. She worries a lot and has a somewhat mother like complex. A scraped knee could be the end of the world in her eyes. Since becoming a sparrowmon she has shown herself to be a bit more childlike and fun. BACKGROUND Penguinmon hatched as a Yukimi Botamon all alone in the darkness of a great forest, her egg having been lost by the carrier whom was supposed to protect her. She was forced to fend for herself, yet her loving demeanour never failed her. For days she fouraged for food and fought of other digimon, sure she was beaten but she never gave up, never dispersed in to data. She was waiting for something, for someone, she knew he was coming...she just had to wait.  During their time she was killed and returned to a digitama revealing her new sparromwon form upon returning to her rookie stage

BASE SPECIES Sparrowmon BASE FAMILY Nature Spirit BASE ATTRIBUTE Unknown BASE TYPE Bird Machine

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Yukimi Botamon

FRESH

DESCRIPTION Yukimi Botamon looks very much like a white teddy bear face, its form all mushed together into a pure white orb with little round ears and cole like black eyes, she looks as though she could be a mini teddy bear snow man. PASSIVE ABILITIES ○ ABILITY - Due to its baby like appearance many digimon will hold back their true power when striking this digimon. Nobody wants to beat a baby now do they? ATTACKS ○ ATTACK - Diamon Dust: Yukimi Botamon releases a small amount of frozen powder which causes cold damage to anyone it strikes. [instant duration, no cooldown]

FAMILY Unknown ATTRIBUTE None TYPE Slime

Tsunomon

IN-TRAINING

DESCRIPTION Tsunomon is an orb like Digimon with orange fur covering the majority of its body, it has a large horn upon the center of her head. PASSIVE ABILITIES ○ ABILITY Feral Sense: Due to becoming more beast like, Tsunomon has increased her sense of smell, able to detect others from further away, ATTACKS in-training digimon are allowed one active attack at creation. ○ ATTACK - Bubble Blow: An attack which releases a vast quantity of bubbles that pop upon contact with a target, it doesn't really do much damage but is used more to intimidate due to the sheer volume of bubbles released. [instant duration no cooldown]

FAMILY Nature Spiritd ATTRIBUTE Data TYPE Lesser

Penguinmon

ROOKIE

DESCRIPTION Penguinmon takes the form of a small 3 foot 4 bird like digimon, with soft tufts of blue fur and a white unerbelly with three V like patters and a bolt like tuft. PASSIVE ABILITIES ○ ABILITY - Adorable Face: Due to the adorableness of Penguinmon, digimon of the opposite gender might become somewhat infatuated with her or may find her so cute [like an owner would find a dog] they may be unable to strike her at full power. ATTACKS ○ ATTACK - Eternal Slapping: Penguinmon proceeds to slap the opponent with great force. [instant duration with no  cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Ice Shard: Penguinmon releases a vast amount of ice that is moulded within its mouth in to a shard of ice that is then ejected at an opponent. [Instant duration with a 2 post cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Sliding Attack: Penguinmon slides upon her belly aiming to strike an opponent in the legs to make them fall down. [instant duration with no cooldown]

FAMILY Deep Savers ATTRIBUTE Vaccine TYPE Bird

Kokatorimon

Champion

DESCRIPTION Kokatorimon is a large chicken easily standing at 7 foot in heght, its large wings are unable to carry its heavy body so it has developed powerful legs PASSIVE ABILITIES ○ ABILITY - Flightless Bird- Due to being flightless this species of digimon has developed enhanced power in her feet, her speed is naturally enhanced granting her the ability to run faster than many other digimon, her speed is near that of an ultimate. ATTACKS ○ ATTACK - Scar Red Eyes: Kokatorimon releases a flash of red energy from her eyes, this energy burst completely petrifies digimon of champion level and below while paralysing 50% of ultimate armour level digimon. Pure ultimate and above digimon are uneffected. [2 post duration and 4 post cooldown]. Can effect 1 digimon at one time. One must see the flash tobecome affected ○ ATTACK - Turbo Rooster: Enhances the speed of the digimon for 3 posts [2 post duration 2 post cooldown] [Large speed boost] ○ ATTACK - Red Chicken Attack, - using its enhanced speed Kokatorimon rushes in to head but an opponent [instant use no cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Melting Aura - Kokatorimon releases a wave of flames from its wings which span a range of 5 meters with a widt of 3 meters. [Instant with 1 post cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Shadowy Gaze - Assimilated from Skullknightmon. The user empowers their eyes with a dark energy, causing all those who look into them to suffer a one post stun. If the target is data type, they will also become FEARED, dropping their attacking power by 10% for three posts. Shadowy Gaze has a cooldown of two posts.

FAMILY Wind Guardians ATTRIBUTE Data TYPE Giant Bird

Parrotmon

Ultimate

DESCRIPTION Parrotmon takes the form of a massive parrot like creature, its large wings are located on its back with a wing span of 8 feet, its body from head to two is 16 feet. PASSIVE ABILITIES ○ ABILITY - Sonic Flight: Due to being a strong flyer, this digimon gains a massive speed boost when in the air, the creature is able to fly almost on par with many of the flying mega type digimon and can easily out speed many of the champion and ultimate type digimon. when in the air. ATTACKS ○ ATTACK - Mjolnir Thunder: Fires a burst of electricity from the tufts upon its head. [instant duration with a 1 post cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Sonic Destroyer: Parrotmon flies at its foe before rapidly stopping in an instance, this sudden stop creates a sonic boom in Parrot mons image which flies at the opponent [instant duration and 2 post cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Parrot Attack: Parrotmon releases a burst of sound that disperses an oncoming attack, alas it can only be used on attacks that have energy based forms. [instant duration and 2 post cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Feather Dance - Parrotmon releases a flurry of feathers in a single direction, these feathers are razor sharp. [instant duration/1post cooldown] ○ ATTACK -Flying descent: Using its speed and strength, Parrotmon grasps on to a target and flies as high in to the air as it can, it then soars downwards to pick up speed before throwing the target to the ground. [instant / 0 post cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Darkness Claw: Assimilated from Skullgreymon. The user empowers one of his claws or hands with dark energy, and then swipes at the target with incredible force. If the target is data type, then it suffers a stun for two posts, being shocked from the raw terror of the attack. Darkness Claw has a cooldown of one post.

FAMILY Wind Guardian ATTRIBUTE Vaccine TYPE Giant Bird

Tocanmon

Armour [Champion]

DESCRIPTION Tocanmon is an armour digimon whom has degenarted feathers, unable to fly, she is protected by a big shell while having a crescent upon her head. She is the same height as when she is within her Penguimon form. PASSIVE ABILITIES ○ ABILITY - Shell Protect. Due to the digarmour protecting her, damage from champion and lower based digimon is reduced by 25% ATTACKS ○ ATTACK - Pliers Cutter: Toucanmon either snaps her beak on to an opponent causing clamping damage [which can also cut through most materials but digichrome] or spins around with her bea using it as a blunt weapon. [instant duration and 1 post cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Crest Cutter: Toucanmon fires two blades of light from her crest, the blades are hot and caus burn effects causing mild burn damage for a further 3 posts [Instant duration with a 1 post cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Beak Drill: After running, toucanmon jumps forward and spins creating a somewhat faux drill with its beak to cause penatrative damage. [instant with no cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Marble Marble: Toucanmon releases four orbs of light from her mouth that each create a a 3 meter explosion. [Instant with 1 post cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Chrome Shell: Toucanmon hides in her shell, using this as a defence she can avoid damage from a single attack from even mega leel digimonl. Alas this can only be used once per thread.

FAMILY Deep Savers ATTRIBUTE Data TYPE Bird

Thunderbirmon

Armour [Ultimate]

DESCRIPTION A blue and yellow design shows this is a creature of lightning, its beuty is unparralleled. It has a height of 10ft while its wing span is 11 feet. PASSIVE ABILITIES ○ ABILITY - Static Force: When touched by a digimon physically, the static electricity from its feathers paralyses foes that touch it. Champion and below are fully paralysed for a single turn while ultimates only have the area touched paralysed for half a post. a fun fact is thunderbirmon seems to have soe control over this ability and it can be used to lock the tamer riding her in place to avoid fallin off. ○ ABILITY - Due to the static force surrounding its body, it can weaken energy based attacks, gaining a 25% damage decrease from all energy based assaults. ATTACKS ○ ATTACK - Thunderstorm: Thunderbirmon flaps her wings and creates a mass electrical storm that shoots thunderbolts at targets for a total of three posts, each bolt is fired in a 2 minute interval over a range of sixty meters. prior to the bolts being released said a flash of lightning appears.A total of 15 bolts is fired within these three posts [3 post duration 5 post cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Spark Wing: Releases an array of thunder clad feathers at an opponent in a single direction, these feathers caus lightning damage but also fully paralyse opponents of ultimate and belowt] [two post duration and 3 post cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Thunder Lance: The body of the bird seems to become thunder that shoots through an opponent reforming on the other side, no status effect but mass thunder damage [instant with a 2 post cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Electro Barrier: A defence based technique in which the bird creatures a barrier that can be small enough to cover its body or large enough to cover many people [total max 30 meter diameter. anyone to touch the barrier is paralysed unless ultimate level or above in which they will recieve a 25% debuff in speed and movement though megas will recieve no debuff. Those whom touch it will only be paralysed/debuffed for a single post. It can halt attack frequencies though can be destroyed by two ultimate attacks or a single mega attack. [5 post duration 6 post cooldown] ○ ATTACK - Thunder shock - A trust move in which the user grasps on to a target and releases a jolt of lightning all over the body,  [instant no cooldown]

FAMILY Metal Empire Wind Guardians ATTRIBUTE Data TYPE Bird

[Dr. Bees]

Just tell us what you want edited and which individual parts and we can do it.

[Sebastian Devaroux]

SHADOWY GAZE - Assimilated from Skullknightmon. The user empowers their eyes with a dark energy, causing all those who look into them to suffer a one post stun. If the target is data type, they will also become FEARED, dropping their attacking power by 10% for three posts. Shadowy Gaze has a cooldown of two posts.

^ I would like this added to Cockatorimons attack.

DARKNESS CLAW - Assimilated from Skullgreymon. The user empowers one of his claws or hands with dark energy, and then swipes at the target with incredible force. If the target is data type, then it suffers a stun for two posts, being shocked from the raw terror of the attack. Darkness Claw has a cooldown of one post.

While having this added to Parrotmons attack ^

[Dr. Bees]

APPROVED!

[Sebastian Devaroux]

So this is a big edit, but i realize my attacks are so hard core nerfed with cooldowns compared to the vast majority of people.

So i would like these moves changed to these cooldowns/removed
ATTACK - Eternal Slapping: Penguinmon proceeds to slap the opponent with great force. [instant duration with no cooldown]
○ ATTACK - Ice Shard: Penguinmon releases a vast amount of ice that is moulded within its mouth in to a shard of ice that is then ejected at an opponent. [Instant duration with a 2 post cooldown]
○ ATTACK - Sliding Attack: Penguinmon slides upon her belly aiming to strike an opponent in the legs to make them fall down. [instant duration with no cooldown]

Kokatorimon

ATTACK - Scar Red Eyes: Kokatorimon releases a flash of red energy from her eyes, this energy burst completely petrifies digimon of the champion and below levels while pertrifying 50% of those whom are at the armour ultimate form. Pure ultimates and higher are uneffected,[3 post duration and 4 post cooldown]. Can effect 1 digimon at one time. Once must see the flash tobecome affected
○ ATTACK - Turbo Rooster: Enhances the speed of the digimon for 3 posts [2 post duration 2 post cooldown] [Large speed boost]
○ ATTACK - Red Chicken Attack, - using its enhanced speed Kokatorimon rushes in to head butt an opponent [instant use no cooldown]
○ ATTACK - Melting Aura - Kokatorimon releases a wave of flames from its wings which span a range of 5 meters with a widt of 3 meters. [Instant Duration and 1 post cooldown]
○ ATTACK - Shadowy Gaze - Assimilated from Skullknightmon. The user empowers their eyes with a dark energy, causing all those who look into them to suffer a one post stun. If the target is data type, they will also become FEARED, dropping their attacking power by 10% for three posts. Shadowy Gaze has a cooldown of two posts.

Parrotmon

○ ATTACK - Mjolnir Thunder: Fires a burst of electricity from the tufts upon its head. [instant duration with a 2 post cooldown]
○ ATTACK - Sonic Destroyer: Parrotmon flies at its foe before rapidly stopping in an instance, this sudden stop creates a sonic boom in Parrot mons image which flies at the opponent [instant duration and 1 post cooldown]
○ ATTACK - Parrot Attack: Parrotmon releases a burst of sound that disperses an oncoming attack, alas it can only be used on attacks that have energy based forms. [instant duration and 2 post cooldown]
○ ATTACK - Feather Dance - Parrotmon releases a flurry of feathers in a single direction, these feathers are razor sharp. [instant duration/1 post cooldown]
○ ATTACK -Flying descent: Using its speed and strength, Parrotmon grasps on to a target and flies as high in to the air as it can, it then soars downwards to pick up speed before throwing the target to the ground. [instant no cooldown]
○ ATTACK - Darkness Claw: Assimilated from Skullgreymon. The user empowers one of his claws or hands with dark energy, and then swipes at the target with incredible force. If the target is data type, then it suffers a stun for two posts, being shocked from the raw terror of the attack. Darkness Claw has a cooldown of one post.

Touconmon

ATTACK - Pliers Cutter: Toucanmon either snaps her beak on to an opponent causing clamping damage [which can also cut through most materials but digichrome] or spins around with her bea using it as a blunt weapon. [instant duration and 1 post cooldown]
○ ATTACK - Crest Cutter: Toucanmon fires two blades of light from her crest, the blades are hot and caus burn effects causing mild burn damage for a further 3 posts [Instant duration with a 2 post cooldown]
○ ATTACK - Beak Drill: After running, toucanmon jumps forward and spins creating a somewhat faux drill with its beak to cause penatrative damage. [instant with no cooldown]
○ ATTACK - Marble Marble: Toucanmon releases four orbs of light from her mouth that each create a a 3 meter explosion. [Instant Duration and a 2 post cooldown]
○ ATTACK - Chrome Shell: Toucanmon hides in her shell, using this as a defence she can avoid damage from a single attack from even mega leel digimonl. Alas this can only be used once per thread.

Thunderbirmon


○ ATTACK - Thunderstorm: Thunderbirmon flaps her wings and creates a mass electrical storm that shoots thunderbolts at targets for a total of three posts, each bolt is fired in a 2 minute interval over a range of sixty meters. prior to the bolts being released said a flash of lightning appears.A total of 15 bolts is fired within these three posts [3 post duration 4 post cooldown]
○ ATTACK - Spark Wing: Releases an array of thunder clad feathers at an opponent in a single direction, these feathers caus lightning damage but also fully paralyse opponents of champion and below levels while caus a speed reduction and numbness of 25% to ultimates, megas only recieve minor pain and are uneffected by the status effect] [instant duration and 3 post cooldown] [Status effects last for 2 posts, cooldown begins at the end of the status effect]
○ ATTACK - Thunder Lance: The body of the bird seems to become thunder that shoots through an opponent reforming on the other side, no status effect but mass thunder damage [instant with 2 post cooldown]
○ ATTACK - Electro Barrier: A defence based technique in which the bird creatures a barrier that can be small enough to cover its body or large enough to cover many people [total max 30 meter diameter. anyone to touch the barrier is paralysed unless ultimate level or above in which they will recieve a 25% debuff in speed and movement though megas will recieve no debuff. It can halt attack frequencies though can be destroyed by two ultimate attacks or a single mega attack. [5 post duration 6 post cooldown]
○ ATTACK - Thunder shock - A trust move in which the user grasps on to a target and releases a jolt of lightning all over the body causing lightning damage [This has been edited removing the status effects] So cooldown [instant duration and no cooldown]
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These edits have been made to the first page also.  [Notes: Scar red eyes has been edited to fit more with other attacks seen on the site.]

[Horror Bull]

wait so, everything you're asking to be changed is also in the first post, right?

[Sebastian Devaroux]

Yeah, i updated th first post with all the edits as well as making the post that has information on all the edits without the coding so the first post has all the edits already made to them.That way when/if approved it can just be copied and pasted in to the original application

[Dr. Bees]

APPROVED!

[Sebastian Devaroux]

Sparrowmon

ROOKIE

DESCRIPTION Sparrowmon is a cybernetic bird, it is roughly 3 foot in height when standing, Golden with a white face, white hands and feet. This beautiful digimon was created when Penguinmon lost her life, in doing so machine like data seemed to mix with hers changing her rookie and base form into the golen digimon one sees before you. The guns it holds in its hands are a set of twin pistols named "Zanahoria", made by the same craftsman who produced their sister-gun, the "Berenjena" possessed by Beelzebumon. PASSIVE ABILITIES ○ ABILITY - Mechanised Repair Service : Every two posts, the cybernetic/machine posts set about healing sparrowmon, restoring health by 10% every two posts. ATTACKS ○ Soaring Jet - Sparrowmon ascends in to the air before flying towards a target at full speed, the digimon then proceeds to ram the opponent with his head/body. [Instant/0 cooldown] ○ Wing Edge - Hidden Blades are extended along its wings which are used to slice opponents whom it passes by. [instant/0 cooldown] ○ Random Laser - Utilizing it's guns, Sparrowmon releases a volley of lasers [two from each gun thus a total of four] which are used to strike an enemy, these lasers are of the holy type thus seem to do double damage to virus based digimon. [instant with a 2 post cooldown]

FAMILY Nature Spirit ATTRIBUTE Unknown TYPE Bird Machine

Raptor Sparrowmon

CHAMPION

DESCRIPTION Raptor Sparrowmon stands at a whopping 8 foot tall, she is slender and has a wing span of 4 feet. due to her slender frame though she is unable to actually carry an actual human, though perhaps she would be able to carry a smaller digimon. PASSIVE ABILITIES ○Digi Chrome - Being covered in the digi chromezoid this digimon has an amazing defence, which keeps increasing each time she is struck, each time she is struck her defence increases by 10% per post [maxing at 100%] ATTACKS rookie digimon are allowed three active attacks at creation. ○ Talon Toss - Raptor Sparrowmon descends upon an opponent, her sheer strength allowing her to lift the majority of digimon, her talons penetrate the skin for extra grip thus granting penetrative damage, Raptor Sparrowmon then soars in to the sky and throws her captive towards the ground. [Instant - no cooldown] ○ Plasma Burst - Opening her mouth, Raptor Sparrowmon releases a burnign beam of plasma at an opponent, due to the compressed burst of plasma, this attack ignores defensive passives but not defensive techniques and leaves burning damage that burns the opponent for a further post after being struck. [2 post duration/5 post cooldown] ○ Cybernetic Burst - Raptor Sparrowmon covers herself in a blue glow that stems from the green crystals on her wings. This light covers her entire body and she then proceeds to fly towards a target, halting her movement the aura continues to fly and strikes the opponent. This is her strongest attack and actually does DOUBLE THE DAMAGE than an ordinary champion move. [instant duration/5 post cooldown] ○ Repair System - Covering her body in a green light stemming from the jewels on her wings, Raptor Sparrowmon instantly disperses any debuffs that effect her. [instant- 3 post cooldown]

FAMILY N/A ATTRIBUTE Unknown TYPE Cyborg

[Sebastian Devaroux]

Sparrowmon is to become Penguinmons new base form.

[Dr. Bees]

HANG ON!
YOU NEED TO EDIT THIS A BIT...

1. You haven't edited the names into "DIGIMON FORM NAME".

2. Sparrowmon's Mechanised Repair System -- wait, he's not effected by that which lowers movement... but it doesn't count speed debuffs? I'm a little confused my dude. Might be worth clarifying precisely what you mean. An immunity to all speed debuffs is a bit much at Rookie.

3. RaptorSparrowmon's DigiChrome -- Needs to be lowered monumentally. 25%.

4. RaptorSparrowmon's Plasma Burst -- Ignoring passives is a bit much. Either the cooldown on this needs to be hiked up (to about 5) or it needs to only effect same level & below.

5. RaptorSparrowmon's Repair System -- 3 post cooldown.

[Sebastian Devaroux]

1. Edited
2. Changed
3. Changed
4. Cooldown increased
5. Cooldown increased

[Dr. Bees]

APPROVED!

[Sebastian Devaroux]

Ability: Penatrative Assault: Parrotmon's offence is incredibly powerful, her assaults being known to completely disregard and penetrate defence based techniques without any hindrance. This also allows her to bypass defence increaseing buffs of other digimon that are 50% or lower hitting them hard as if the increasement was not there. [This does not effect defence based passives]

[Dr. Bees]

HANG ON!
YOU NEED TO EDIT THIS A BIT...

1. Can't work on Digimon of higher level

2. Additionally this is pretty OP especially if it's always active. I'll allow it if Parrotmon can just ignore UP TO and including 50% of a defense buff