Zachary Scryer's Character Page edit

[Zachary Scryer]

The following page is to fix errors and improve my current character page. ALong with some changes to better improve . 

1. big thing, adding Armored Champion and Champion Level forms. 

2. Fixing Panthermon's Rookie Passive Speed Type. After seeing others with far more superior percentages, I turned it to be  a bit more significant to my allowed ability. 

3. Coding fix, adding pictures and the works. 


Zachary Scryer character page link


Also requesting this to also be updated to give my champion form Mytholomon-- the Darkness Claw attack from the Skullgreymon event. 

[Zachary Scryer]

Zachary Scryer

TAMER

PERSONALITY Zachary is a smart, clever and kind-hearted kid with a great sense of creativity. He is always thinking up new ideas and concepts. He is often seen with a sketchbook to write down ideas and small sketches to go with them. He can seem a bit disconnected at times, often in his own world thinking up ideas, but he is a kid person who doesn't hesitate to help those around him. He loves to put himself into games of strategy and creative angles, often surprising others with his clever tactics. Despite his somewhat withdrawn tendencies, he has a genuine desire to reach out and make friends. One of his favorite pastimes is the digimon card game. SKILLS FLAWS ● Cool under pressure ● Creative ● Computer savvy ● Quick Thinking ● Patient ● Easy to fool since he is so kind hearted ● Sensitive ● Afraid of bugs ● Second guesses himself if debating a big decision ●Takes on too much responsibility and blames himself over things out of his control. APPEARANCE Zachary is a young man of roughly 15 years old. He has medium length brown hair brushed down and to the side in the front. He has brown eyes and a decently proportioned face. His skin is a health sun-kissed color. He often is seen wearing blue jacket with a light blue T shirt under it-- usually with a 'chakra' symbol on it. He also wears light baish slacks and sneakers. He feels he often should dress for utility and comfort far more than looks alone, and what he wants to look as. At times he will also wear a short black jacket-- depending on mood. INVENTORY ○ ITEM - Backpack, with sketchbook and smart phone ○ ITEM - Card binder. ○ ITEM - McMonburger ○ THE MARK - The Mark is a branding on one's body on their skin. This mark cannot be removed or deactivated at any time, nor can it be traded. There are only a few ways to purify this Mark, and traditional means will not work. The Mark selects somebody's soul for the taking, and will not stop until it has been claimed. This Mark gives one a 50% power bonus when using Dark Digivolution - but also haunts the marked with phantoms of all those they have slain in the past. Every thread the user has with this item has a chance of being attacked by phantoms of their past, which will take physical form and hunt the marked until defeated. ○ ITEM - description. do not add anything purchasable from the shop - staff will do this. BIOGRAPHY Zachary grew up in New York State, America. Raised by loving parents, his mother and father did well to make sure Zachary was well educated and supported as any child should be. Zachary had attended school as the rest, though despite his desire to be happy and friendly with others, he was not always welcomed. He suffered from certain bullies that found his sensitive nature amusing to poke fun at. Due to this, Zachary would often withdraw himself from the group. Growing up he spent most of his time in libraries, reading and on computers to find things of interest. Eventually, he found Digimon online and loved the idea of the game. Eventually, he learned his uncle actually worked at Bandai and helped create some of the cards for the game. Zachary got many cards as gifts from his uncle, and learned how to build a proper deck. He began to play the game and slowly gained progress in games in card shops and other places to play. Still, the interest in digimon along with his smarts, made him isolated as a 'nerd' to many people in school. It didn't make bullying any easier on him. During recent changes in his parents work, Zachary soon moved to New York City, in hopes to also have a fresh start in school and in his life. To a degree, his best social experience had been limited to the internet, having chatted with many fellow digimon lovers online. However, as he moved to New York City-- he soon would learn there was more to his hobby than just cards. His destiny as a Digimon Tamer was about to begin.

NICKNAME Zaber-- Internet User Name. AGE 15 GENDER Male HEIGHT 5' 8" WEIGHT 150 lbs BIRTHPLACE New York, USA. DIGIVICE D-Power: Blue outer shell, Silver rim and buttons (Runes engraved later) CREST Crest of Kindness PLAYED BY Zaber177.

[i]Fairy Tail, Jellal (with brown hair) [/i] as [i]Zachary Scryer [/i]

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PANTHERMON

BASE FORM

APPEARANCE A black panther-like mythical beast digimon. He is roughly a meter and a half in size, 30 inches tall on the ground-- the basic size of a real live jungle cat. The beast is covered in pure black fur, easily to camouflage himself at night. He has yellow eyes that are translucent at night. Panthermon has two shin-guards around his two front legs near his paws, with a jewel embedded into each one. On his right rear leg, he has a gold digi-ring around it, a symbol of his mystical origin. He has short round ears, and a mouth of sharp teeth. PERSONALITY Panthermon is a calm, centered and mature digimon. Unlike many rookies, Panthermon seems wiser and more experienced than most would think. Like many cats, one could look at him and tell he is calm and easy going, but in truth he is on guard-- always ready for any situation that should arise. BACKGROUND Pathermon's origin is a complicated one. Several years ago-- during the time of when the Olympus 12 and the Sovereigns fought, one of the Sovereigns powerful minions fought and destroyed in the name of his master, Baihumon. He served loyally to the idea of domination over the humans-- till he was destroyed. Many years passed till his data regrouped-- taking on a new form. In the form of a digimon created by a human's mind. Zachary had originally created Panthermon's form-- but never intended for it to be created. However, this digimon drifted through the digital sea, till it found the new form to take. Regaining its form-- he lost all memory of his past or his origin. Though he maintains general knowledge and discipline of his previous incarnation, he had no knowledge of his previous life or his time serving the sovereign. Only bits and pieces. Though not too unnerved of it, he remains concerned of what his missing memory means. However, as he grows to know his tamer and learns more of the human world-- his future becomes more and more uncertain. Despite his origins, Panthermon remains true as a noble, wise and brave warrior of a digimon.

BASE SPECIES Mythical Beast BASE FAMILY Nature Spirits, Jungle Troopers. BASE ATTRIBUTE Vaccine. BASE TYPE Rookie

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Kitmon

FRESH

DESCRIPTION In the fresh/baby form, Kitmon as he is known as is only viewed as a soft little black-colored flame. It is not capable of burning anything in this state but can easily move around. Its face shows a silhouette of a cat-like face. It is no bigger than the size of a fist. (Rather not use this for RP purpose) PASSIVE ABILITIES ○ ABILITY - Night Light: Illuminates a dark area, despite its glow being that of darkness. It is said it consumes the darkness around it to grow. ATTACKS ○ ATTACK - Black Bite: A relatively bite attack, that once done, the sensation of burning is left after the attack from its fiery form.

FAMILY Jungle Trooper ATTRIBUTE Vaccine TYPE Beast Digimon.

SPRIGGMON/SPRIGGANMON

IN-TRAINING

DESCRIPTION Spriggmon/Sprigganmon is a tiny cat-like creature, no bigger than a six inches in size. It is lithe black cat-like creature with blue eyes, and light blue fur inside its small ears. It has a curly tail, and oddly it has two little blue wings similar to a butterfly's. In mythology, it was considered to be among creatures called the catsith, a race of fairies that were said to be bad luck. PASSIVE ABILITIES ○ ABILITY - Flight: Use of little wings in this state allows it to fly around easily. ATTACKS ○ ATTACK - Faerie Fire: Creates a tiny violet flame that he has flutter through the air at a target, dealing light damage.

FAMILY Jungle Troopers ATTRIBUTE Vaccine TYPE Mythical Beast.

PANTHERMON

ROOKIE

DESCRIPTION A black panther-like mythical beast digimon. He is roughly a meter and a half in size, 30 inches tall on the ground-- the basic size of a real live jungle cat. The beast is covered in pure black fur, easily to camouflage himself at night. He has yellow eyes that are translucent at night. Panthermon has two shin-guards around his two front legs near his paws, with a jewel embedded into each one. On his right rear leg, he has a gold digi-ring around it, a symbol of his mystical origin. He has short round ears, and a mouth of sharp teeth. PASSIVE ABILITIES ○ ABILITY Mythic Bonds: Panthermon is a mythical creature in nature. Due to its vast magical potential, he is able to read the minds of people he knows. As a result, he can sense his tamer's presence, even communicate with him from afar. ○ ABILITY Speed Type: Panthermon has 20% more speed than most digimon of his present level, making him more agile by nature. Speed associated attacks and benefits increase more by effect. ATTACKS ○ ATTACK - Spiral Flame: Panthermon fires a spiraling stream of fire at a target, dealing powerful fire damage. ○ ATTACK - Shadow Claw: Darkness glows around the panther's claws. Upon a slash, it leaves three crescent blades of darkness. Attack can be done in melee range or by range, launching the attack towards a target. Capable of slicing through sheet metal. ○ ATTACK On the Prowl: Panthermon's body shimmers and fades into the background. He becomes invisible for quick escapes or hiding from enemies. A useful skill, however, Panthermon cannot maintain invisibility and attack at the same time. To attack, he must become visible once again. ○ ATTACK Shadowy Gaze - Assimilated from Skullknightmon. The user empowers their eyes with a dark energy, causing all those who look into them to suffer a one post stun. If the target is data type, they will also become FEARED, dropping their attacking power by 10% for three posts. Shadowy Gaze has a cooldown of two posts.

FAMILY Nature Spirits, Jungle Trooper ATTRIBUTE Vaccine TYPE Mythical Beast

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MYTHOLOMON

CHAMPION

DESCRIPTION Panthermon's Champion form. A large black panther adorn with mythical armor over his chest, around his paws, and a ruby placed upon the top of his head. He has mystical armor also along his shoulders, like guards, and also on his rear legs as well. He is roughly 3 meters long, along with his tail, and 1 meter tall in size. His enhanced size makes him far larger than jungle cats in the real world, along with being able, also allowing one to ride on his back if needed. Mytholomon's fur is pitched black with violet colored runes that run along parts of his limbs and body. Most notable, however, is that Mytholomon has a pair of large feathery wings, which are often ablaze in flames. Though dangerous, Mytholomon has excellent control of the flames he creates, designating who to burn and who to leave unharmed. He maintains panther-like features, with the exception of his ears are now more pointed upon his head. The end of his tail also glows like the runes, representing his magical power. PASSIVE ABILITIES ○ ABILITY Flight: With fiery wings, Mytholomon is able to fly freely through the air. Given flight and his panther-like abilities, he is naturally faster by a passive 20% boost to his speed. ATTACKS ○ ATTACK - Fire Storm: Mytholomon while airborne, flaps his large fiery wings. After a strong flap of it, he releases a wide-reaching inferno that blows out towards the enemy. The space before him becomes an inferno, dealing great damage to those hit by it. This attack may hit multiple enemies at once. This attack may hit multiple enemies at once. Opponents hit by this will be burned, taking damage for an additional turn. ○ ATTACK - Ruby Roar: Red energy gathers inside Mytholomon's mouth. Upon roaring, he fires a ruby-colored beam of energy out at his enemy. If hit, enemy will suffer a -20% debuff to his defense in addition to damage. Cannot Stack. One post cooldown. ○ ATTACK - Jungle Fury: Mytholomon releases a high-tone panther's roar out into the air around them. With it, a pulse of mysterious, shadowy energy is released. This attack bolsters himself and his allies' power by 25% for 3 posts. Cooldown is 2 after duration ends. ○ ATTACK - Nether Guard: Runes of Digicode appear around in the area in a large area around Mytholomon. Sacred runes etched in the space around completely block any attacks of champion level or below for that turn. Attacks from ultimate level Digimon are reduced by 20%, Megas by 5%, and no defense from Super Megas. The barrier is stronger against darkness & Virus oriented attacks by an extra 20%, still following same level progression described as above. This barrier may be used to protect Mytholomon, along with other allies within range around him. ○ ATTACK - DARKNESS CLAW : Assimilated from Skullgreymon. The user empowers one of his claws or hands with dark energy, and then swipes at the target with incredible force. If the target is data type, then it suffers a stun for two posts, being shocked from the raw terror of the attack. Darkness Claw has a cooldown of one post.

FAMILY Nature Spirits, Jungle Trooper, Nightmare Soldier ATTRIBUTE Vaccine TYPE Mythical Beast

BAGHEERAMON

ARMOR CHAMPION (DIGIMENTAL OF FRIENDSHIP)

DESCRIPTION Transformed by the Digimental of Friendship, a new beast of lightning is born. Bagheeramon, derived from his name is a black tiger of black-ash color fur with grey stripes along his body. He is roughly a meter tall and two meters long. Similar to the style of the well known Raidramon-- The mythical black tiger is adorn in black armor with streaks of blue lightning bolts striped over the armor, signifying the power of lightning. He has armor over his front paws and claws, acting as weapons for attacks. The rear and front legs have legging armor as well. The tiger's face is masked by battle armor as well, revealing his eyes and maw through it. The armor goes up to his shoulders, along with the sides of his haunches and lower back. Protruding from the armor plating are several lightning-shaped blades. The claw armor has three small ones on each, the mask has two on either side, each shoulder guard has one, and on his tail, one lightning shaped blade is placed on it. On the armor on the shoulder guards above the blades, the crest of friendship is inscribed on each. Bagheeramon is considered one of the fastest digimon around, able to move as fast as lightning. Using both lethal blades and electric power, he can decimate multiple enemies in the blink of an eye. Often he is confused with the mythological beast "Raijuu", the servant to the god of lightning. The name Bagheera literally means "Black Tiger". PASSIVE ABILITIES ○ ABILITY Ride the Lightning: With lightning coursing through his veins, Bahgeeramon is a speed-fiend by nature. Each time this digimon uses an attack and hits successfully; digimon speed will increase by 20%. This buff is stackable and lasts through the battle while in this form. Max stat may be raised be raised to 100%. ATTACKS ○ ATTACK - Storm Predator: Bahgeeramon's blades glow with electric power and empower the large tiger. In a mighty burst of electric speed, the lightning tiger sprints and ricochets at lightning speed around an area, attacking all enemies in a blitz of multi-lightning slashes. The attack is so fast and accurate, it is like a bolt of living lightning. If used on a single enemy, attack deals 50% critical damage. Cooldown is 2 posts. ○ ATTACK - Black-Lightning Cannon: The power of lightning is condensed and super charged by Bahgeeramon, causing it to become a black color. The blades act as conductor, towards his mouth, and he releases a super charge beam of black lightning upon his enemies. It is so powerful, it rips through metals and substances, leaving a scorching hole. Stuns an enemy for one turn. Cooldown 1 post. ○ ATTACK - Charge Claw: Lightning charges into Bahgeeramon's armor and and into his claws. He shoots towards his target, the lightning propelling him forward. Appearing as a bolt of lightning, this boosts his speed by 25%, and slashes at the enemy with electrified claws and teeth. ○ ATTACK - Overload : Lightning courses around the black tiger, and after gathering up, it is unleashed everywhere within a 25 meter diameter of the digimon's location. Deals lightning damage to all those around him. If enemies are machine (Metal Empire) or Aquatic (Deep Saviors) digimon, they receive an extra 50% more critical damage from attack.

FAMILY Nature Spirits, Jungle Trooper, ATTRIBUTE Vaccine TYPE Mythical Beast

[Dr. Bees]

HANG ON!
YOU NEED TO EDIT THIS A BIT...

1. There are a few lingering coding and aesthetics errors. These need to be fixed -- try editing the app in BBcode if you find this difficult.

2. Panthermon's Speed Type -- far, FAR too high a value for a Rookie-level Digimon.

3. Mytholomon's Flight -- Same thing. Lower the value.

4. Mytholomon's Ruby Roar -- No debuff stack, and this needs a 1 post cooldown.

5. Mytholomon's Nether Guard -- ...what are Digimoji? Do you mean Digicode?

6. Mytholomon's Nether Guard -- Right, well this also gives you complete damage resistance against all viruses above Champion, which obviously isn't going to fly. You're not going to easily deflect SM Virus attacks, so -- the shield itself should lower incoming damage for Ultimates by 20%, Megas by 5% and not effect Super Mega attacks at all. Reflect this in the Virus buff as well -- you can't lower Ultimate damage by 70% as a Champion, that's a tiny bit absurd.

7. Bagheeramon's Ride the Lightning -- Max stacks and cooldowns are what you need. First off: to trigger this passive, the attack must land and connect -- a missed attack will do nothing. Additionally, add that the speed buff caps out at, say, 100%, and cannot increase beyond that.

8. Bagheeramon's Storm Predator -- in the way he moves like a lightning flash, this almost seems far too overpowered -- it implies he moves too fast to guard or dodge or deflect? Reword this attack to make it sound a little less OP -- and if you want to keep the speed buff, it'll need a 3 post cooldown.

9. Bagheeramon's Black Lightning Cannon -- One post cooldown.

10. Bagheeramon's Overload -- A 50 metre diameter is quite a lot -- this should be lowered to 25.

[Zachary Scryer]

Okay ill respond to this in order Bee-- also I put in Darkness claw from Skullgreymon. Sorry I forgot about that.

1. Im bad at coding in this format. Could you specify which parts of the coding I goofed up in?

2. Okay, after talk with you in skype-- 20% boost is made instead of 50.

3. Same as above #2.

4. Ruby Roar-- again what percentage is good but sure 1 post cooldown is fine.

5. Matter of info-- i read on skype Digimoji is the actual name for the glyphs that appear in digimon as a written language. It is written on Alphamon's page but no real big difference either way.

6. Understood about the shield. I'll work to better describe it. Idea was that it just be a ward against evil so i did want it a bit more effective against specific attacks.

7. Okay i understand the max stack. Though 'must hit ' to charge-- is there any alternative around it? I've written it in regardless but like to know my options.

8. Okay well I wouldn't want Storm Predator to be that OP and that long a cooldown. Idea for this is to move fast, almost like ricochet off walls and objects to slash an enemy or enemies multiple times. Could I make a cap of enemies it can hit per use to reduce cooldown or get rid of it?

9. Done for Black Lightning Cannon

10. Overload, reduced its range.

[Dr. Bees]

HANG ON!
YOU NEED TO EDIT THIS A BIT...

1. Spacing and broken divs primarily. Sort it out or repost it, don't care how it gets done

4. No no no -- the debuff needs NOT to stack. 20% is fine, but it just can't hit multiple times at once. Simple.

5. Site canon -- it's Digicode

6. This all seems fine.

7. Nope. No alternative. Must land an attack to trigger.

8. If you get rid of the speed buff, hit 3 enemies max, then a 1 post cooldown is fine.

[Zachary Scryer]

Okay i fixed the coding, i find it better now.

Attack doesn't stack.

Okay changes. I didn't know/forget I get 4 base attacks for champion/armor champion. So i made changes:

Storm Predator does damage to all targets, but no speed buff, while still sprinting and ricochet off things. It has a 'single target' bonus however.

I added two new attacks: Charge Claw for Bahgeeramon, and Jungle Fury for Mytholomon.

Let me know of further changes needed.

[Dr. Bees]

HANG ON!
YOU NEED TO EDIT THIS A BIT...

1. It's not fixed. There's a broken div and the spaces between header, body, and footer in each module of the app are all too wide. Needs to be sorted. If you have to edit in new templates and fill them out, do it.

2. Storm Predator is still far too OP. Get rid of the single target crit bonus, say it can only hit say, 3 targets max, and the line which says it's "so fast and accurate it's like a bolt of living lightning" -- this implies it can't be dodged.

3. Charge Claw needs a duration on the 25% speed boost. If it's longer than just that attack's duration (i.e. instantaneous), it's fine. If it lasts any amount of turns, it needs a cooldown.